小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

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She is a very different girl, have some viewpoint. She is so hot and beautiful.When she was smiling she looks like a wonderful girl, but the wonderful girl has a hot temper,so some like her some one did not ,but she does not care this. She is my friend Zhou Li.