小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

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I have a good frend,she is a beatiful gril ,she have a long black hair,two big black eyes,and a red month.her voice is better,she is good at singing,she is clever gril ,she likes reading books,she is also nice,she ofter helps us,our classmate like her very much I have a good frend,she is a beatiful gril ,she have a long black hair,two big black eyes,and a red month.her voice is better,she is good at singing,she is clever gril ,she likes reading books,she is also nice,she ofter helps us,our classmate like her very much