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we will make good fridends with our teachers and classmates in our life . they will teach you knowledge , tell you how to be a good person and help you out some problems . i have had a friend like this . he not only give me help ,but also let me know to try our best to help others . we have not seen for a long time . i just want to say ：thank you Marry .
