初中英语命题作文真题演练(91):音乐节目

文中单词拼写做的很棒，再多积累些词汇就更好了；错误句子较少，可适当增加一些复杂句的使用；层次不清晰，几乎没有使用衔接词；请注意分段。

Dear Mr. , I am glad to write letters to you . My name is Zhang Hua . I am a middle school student . I often listen to the music radio show . I like it very much ,especially English songs . I am busy with my study . when I am tired , I will turn on the radio and listen to the radio show . To be honesty, the music makes me relaxing and exciting . From this radio show ,I learn more English words and my spoken English is better and better .