初中英语命题作文真题演练(91):音乐节目

文中单词拼写做的很棒，再多积累些词汇就更好了；错误句子较少，可适当增加一些复杂句的使用；层次不清晰，几乎没有使用衔接词；请注意分段。

Dear Mr., I am glad to write letters to you. My name is Zhang Hua. I am a middle school student. I often listen to the music radio show. I like it very much,especially English songs. I am busy with my study. When I am tired, I will turn on the radio and listen to the radio show. To be honesty, the music makes me relaxing and exciting. From this radio show,I learn more English words and my spoken English is better and better.