初中英语命题作文真题演练(90):school English

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Dear Jane, I like “School English” very much. There is something interesting, such as stories, games, Enlish songs and so on. Listening to “School English” is good for improving our spoken English. And I can learn foreign culture better. However sometimes I can’t understand every words, because you speak too quickly. And the program is only shown twice a week. Best wishes for you and “School English”. Yours, Wang Hong