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雅思TASK1小作文模拟题:快餐 Fast food

发布时间:2013-07-04 15:28浏览次数:3577
要求:

The pie chart below gives information about  the fast food preferences of teenagers in the USA.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Write at least 150 words.

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From the chart we know the teens in the USA are much likely to eat Hamburgers.It has 33% of a circle. Second, they like to eat pizza . The third ranking is French Fries. The forth is Fried Chicken. The fifth is Tacos.The least proportion is Sushi. It is just 3% of the teenager's fast food preferences.As we know ,teenagers in USA are tend to eat hamburgers ,which is 7% more than the second ranking Pizza.

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