雅思TASK2小作文模拟题:电脑使用 Computer Use

文中词汇使用较丰富，学术词汇使用要加强；作者句法知识很棒，适当增加从句的使用，会取得更不错的成绩；过渡词和衔接词使用的比较不错。

In recent years,teenagers tend to spend a lot of time playing computer games .It is known to all that playing computer games can cause social and health problems.I will side with this opinion. In my view, playing computer games can cause short-sighted problems .For example , if we sit in front of the computer two or three hours long, we will feel our eyes strained ,not comfortable at all. It is bad for our eyes if we keep staring at the screen without blinking our eyes.In this situation, we may need to wear glasses after all. Besides,playing computer games can cause great effects on our body. We will never do any exercises unless there are PE classes in our school.Therefore,we will feel painful more easily after doing some simple movements because we are lack of doing any exercise when we are playing computer games. Last but not least,playing computer can relax ourselves in some way.However,playing computer can attract our mind so we will always forget the time while we are playing computer games.There are many way to relax not just playing computer games.We can play outdoor games such as hiking ,running, outdoor activities instead of playing computer games.