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Zhichao Xu who a very handsome boy is one of my good friends from the American. He has a short black hair, two small eyes and a sunshine skin. His health is very stronger due to the benifit of build health. He is a tall boy popular in many girls. Reading book is one of his interests.he is never late for go to school and often help us in class. Our classmates and teachers like he very much.