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雅思写作范文:出国旅游的利弊

发布时间:2013-05-15 12:07浏览次数:10546
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Nowadays it is more convenient and easier for people to travel to other countries, is it development a positive or negative effect?

雅思写作主题:出国旅游的利弊,字数在300字以内。

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文章学术词汇较多样,不过请注意单词拼写的检查;衔接词和过渡词用的很不错;能够使用一些简单的从句。

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People prefer travel to other countries for their holidays instead of stay home, obviously, this change benifits from the developing of the new technology. Some people belive that this is a good trend while some others claim is not a good way. In my point of view, I think the positive effects of this phenominon outweights the negative ones. Of course, people spend more time overseas is benificial society and people its own in many ways. First of all, people can get special experiance by traveling around the world. For example, when western people go to eastern countries, they learn Asian culture, eat different food, and most importantly, they experiance a different lifestyle. Secondly, this trend can improve mutual understanding between different races, countries, and cultures. Certainly, there is no better way for people to improve mutual understanding than make them live together, share society, and meet day by day. This is more vivid than read from books or watch on TV shows. Last but not the least, overseas holidays really soothy mind and set people free from life pressure, by simply changing living environment, changing food, having a hike, or breathing different air. However, there are some negative effect could happend also. Firstly, people might have financial issue due to they have spend a lot on their way. Moreover, more tourism might cause local polution which is really harmful, such as more wastes, more traffic, more food requirement. One of the big issue could be conflicts between local residents and the tourists. In other words, the drinks, drugs, and some fancy entertainments might brought troubles for local societ, and the residents do not like these new things. In conclusion, travel world wide for holidays certainly is a significant improve for us. Meanwhile, people also should relize that there are differences between cultures and countries, which we must have some respect for it.

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