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The internet has play an important role in our daly life .It changed our lifes in many ways . With the internet`s quickly development ,mang things become easy than before now.For exmaple ,two peopel can have a face to face talking when they are in different place .And people can find anyting they want by internet . A coin is always has two sides .The internet also take some problems for us .Such as the impact of the internet on interpersonal communication ,some of us used too much time on internet ,hardly have no time to have a talk with them family ,friends or others . As far as i am concerned ,the internet is important for us ,but we can not ingore it`s bad influerce for our interpersonal commuuication .We can not live in the virtual world all the time ,wo need have communication with others .
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