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2012年6月英语六级作文真题:人际沟通

发布时间:2013-05-18 10:50浏览次数:4552
要求:
题目 The Impact of the Internet on Interpersonal Communication
要求
1.For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition.
2.the topic is "The Impact of the Internet on Interpersonal Communication"
3.You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words.
字数:150满分:100分
用户的作文(系统评分60.5分
评语:

简单句比重稍微偏高,注意极个别句子错误;上下文衔接不流畅,文章结构不严谨;文中能较熟练地使用一定的学术词汇,但词汇表达多样性不高,拼写检查还需加强。

用户练习作文:

The internet has play an important role in our daly life .It changed our lifes in many ways . With the internet`s quickly development ,mang things become easy than before now.For exmaple ,two peopel can have a face to face talking when they are in different place .And people can find anyting they want by internet . A coin is always has two sides .The internet also take some problems for us .Such as the impact of the internet on interpersonal communication ,some of us used too much time on internet ,hardly have no time to have a talk with them family ,friends or others . As far as i am concerned ,the internet is important for us ,but we can not ingore it`s bad influerce for our interpersonal commuuication .We can not live in the virtual world all the time ,wo need have communication with others .

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