参考词汇:资源natural resource;节约型社会an energy-saving society
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As we know, when junior students graduate from school, most of their reference books as well as textbooks are thrown away. To construct energy-saving society,I encourage junior students graduate from school,their reference books as well as textbooks are leaving them to next lower level students. The following reasons.First,It can save natural resource.Secand,The book's note can be useful, with the help of notes,students can improve their grades.Third,like Australia has already successful practice.So,we should encourage junior students graduate from school,their reference books as well as textbooks are leave it to next lower level students.