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Source: Bureau of Labor Statistics, Current Population Survey.
作者词汇表达丰富度要继续提升，学术词汇使用过少；正确句子比例较高，适当增加复杂句的使用，文章会更出色；文章结构欠严谨，基本没有衔接成分；请注意分段；可以适当增加副词的使用；连词使用偏少。
More and more students are worried about their study. They turn to tutorial centers for help. I understand them. Getting a tutor during weekends can advance our study. They will have more chance to get to know our problem in study and help us out patiently. The tutors will offer us more exercise that will challenge our ability and better our grades. The teachers are competent as well as inspiring. In short, I am in favor of getting guidance from tutorial courses.
