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2012年12月英语六级作文真题(I):保持信任

发布时间:2013-05-18 10:58浏览次数:6292
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题目:On maintaining trust 保持信任

字数:150满分:100分

用户的作文(系统评分74.0分
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作者句法不错,但是文章整体句子稍微偏短;能较灵活地使用部分学术词汇,有基础拼写错误,需要注意一下;上下文衔接不流畅,文章结构不严谨。

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Everyone has friends, but it doesn't mean they trust each other. Maintaining trust is very necessary, we need to communicate with each other and share ideas. It's difficult to maintain trust. Firstly, we should make some real friends who are really care about you, so that we can tell them everything happened. Secondly, it's obvious that we should make friends on the basis of trust, we can't guess each other. Thirdly, it's important to have a good relationship with people. Some communication skills are necessary. We can have a regular gather time to contact with friends. We know that in the social there are many liers. They lie to others, so people became don't trust others. I t's a serious problem! We should try our best to help people and make many friends.

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