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2012年6月英语六级作文真题:人际沟通

发布时间:2013-05-18 10:50浏览次数:4552
要求:
题目 The Impact of the Internet on Interpersonal Communication
要求
1.For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition.
2.the topic is "The Impact of the Internet on Interpersonal Communication"
3.You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words.
字数:150满分:100分
用户的作文(系统评分72.0分
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作者句法知识很棒,适当增加从句的使用,会取得更不错的成绩;作者词汇表达较丰富准确,不过学术词汇的积累还有很大的空间;文章结构不够严谨,应增加过程性词汇的使用。

用户练习作文:

The internet is play an important role in our daly life.It changed our life in many ways. With the internet`s quickly development,many things become easy than before now.For example,two people can have a face to face talking when they are in the different place.And people can find everyting they want by internet. A coin has two sides.The internet also take some problems for us.Such as the impact of the internet on interpersonal communication ,some of us used too much time on the internet ,hardly have no time to have a talk with them family ,friends or others. As far as I am concerned,the internet is important for us,but we cannot ignore its bad influence for our interpersonal communication.We cannot live in the virtual world all the time,wo need have communication with others.

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