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i have a good friends,he name's David. he born in small cry.he kind hands every one. we the meet in coffeshop.Actually he is my husband,he love me very much. he like reading book and play games. he usually plaied two hours. ,she likes reading books,she is also nice,she ofter helps us,our classmate like her very much