题目:Computer and Man人与电脑
字数:150满分:100分
作者有一定功底,可在平时练习中增加长难句的记忆;文章采用了适当的过渡词和衔接词,结构比较严谨;作者词汇使用较为丰富熟练,单词拼写方面要更仔细。
Computer and Man Nowadays computer becomes more and more popular in our daily life, as time goes by, computer has already taken place so many methods for our communicating. Every coins has two sides, so what should we do the relations between computer and man. With the theclology's development,we often communicating with others through internet, such as QQ email facebook and so on. it makes our life more convenient and more efficent, we can know most of things from computer. it really works. But for our life it also has some bad effect, it's we communicate through computer that we seldom talk with each other face to face . It can make us become selflish . In a word, computer has two sides for our life, we should use it correctly, only in this way can we get more benifits from it.