托福Toefl作文模拟题附范文 第51篇:住在乡下是否比城市好

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Now more and more people go to the urban areas from rural areas, but also some people don’t want to leave the rural areas. Now many people think about that which areas can take better care of their families. In my opinion, people who live in urban areas can take better care of their families. In the urban areas, there are many different kinds of infrastructure. In the urban, the house is pretty good. In the winter, it has central heating and let people feel warm and happy. It is also good for health，the family member will not get cold, fever and so on. If they get them, they can go to the hospital really quickly, and people will also accept pretty good treat. People can recovery more quickly. Now, people are really stressed out, because of the quickly pace of life. Therefore we need more entertainment to relax ourselves. There are many kinds of entertainment in the urban. In the park, there are many exercise, such as Taiji, Kongzhu, dance and so on. Everybody can go there and join in them. These exercise not only relaxed ourselves, but also be good for our health. Therefore, we can usually take our family to the park. If we go to the rural, we cannot have good safeguard, when we are ill, it is also hard to find doctors. There are only land and house in rural, therefore it is really boring to live there. So, it is better to go to the urban, we can take better care of our families.