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I think most of us must have known this sentence."If we don't save water,the last drop of water will be a teardrop". So what do you think of it?In my oppion,first,it is the truth.We cannot live without water. But at present, we must recogonize water suitable to drink less and less. Second,water is polluted more worse.Thar means we will have least water to drink or do any other things. Then, what should we do?I think we should protect water. Call people on recycling water.