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2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

发布时间:2013-05-18 11:00浏览次数:17423
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题目:Computer and Man人与电脑

字数:150满分:100分

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文章学术词汇使用熟练,词汇表达较为丰富;句法知识很棒,若增加一些从句的使用,文章会更出色;衔接成分太少,文章结构欠佳。

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Everyone like different music In our life, different person like different music, whom create this difference? Is not god not angel. For this situation, I think from two cause. The one is individual mental characteristics, the other is culture and region. Everyone has individual mental characteristics. some quiet, some lively; some pessimism and some hopeful. individual mental characteristics have nothing in common with each other cause they choice unlike music. In general, a pessimism man like deep music , but optimistic man enjoy bright music. Humans in disparate region and have different cultured environment to there love for music type is distinction. European for the most part love unruly music, but most Eastern love connotations. Minority people love country music but the Han nationality like popular song. .. .. Too many force combined action can be used different person love different music.

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