2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

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Computer and man now,on the one hand,people and man develop a very good relation,more and more people are addicted to playing games,talking.the majority of people have a tendcy to looking up knowledge.they keep in touch with abord. on the other hand ,they are not good at develop good friendship,they become stranger