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As we all know ,many parents do everything for their children at present.As parents,there is no doubt that they express full love to their children.however ,we need to have a free hand to those who depend on parent's children. From my point of view,first of all,the more things they can participation in person,the more independent they can get it.Nowadays,parents are too spoiled with their children. As a result,it have no benefit to the children to growing up.secondly,I consider that parents should let their children realize the life of tough,by this way ,children will recognize how happiness they are now.Finally,parents should respect their children.Don't arrange their life the step by the next step.Only their character is dependent,they are really independent in some way. If children is independent ,I believe that they will possess a good future.
