2011年12月英语六级作文真题:成功之路

文章在句法方面做的很棒，从句和复杂句的使用不错；文章结构不错，使用了丰富的衔接词和过渡词；作者词汇表达不够多样，希望能多使用学术词汇；请注意分段。

The way to success Nowadays,more and more people try their best to pursue success.Maybe in their mind, success is of great importance,of course , I think so.As far as I am concerned ,there are lots of ways to success. First of all ,if you want to succeed , you must have the mind that you will succeed through your hardworking.I think the people who has the faith that he will succeed in future by his own hands is vital .Secondly ,we can make a plan and do the things follow the plan, a plan will do lots of to your success.Last but not the least ,do youselves and do the way you think .