单词拼写很棒,可考虑增加学术词汇的使用量;句法知识很棒,若增加一些从句的使用,文章会更出色;上下文衔接不流畅,文章结构不严谨。
Today I feel great honor to be here to introduce a Chinese holiday. The Qingming (Pure Brightness) Festival is one of the 24 seasonal division points in China, falling on April each year. After the festival, the temperature will rise up and rainfall increases. It is the high time for spring plowing and sowing. But the Qingming Festival is not only a seasonal point to guide farm work, it is more a festival of commemoration. The Qingming Festival sees a combination of sadness and happiness. This is the most important day of sacrifice. Both the Han and minority ethnic groups at this time offer sacrifices to their ancestors and sweep the tombs of the diseased. Also, they will not cook on this day and only cold food is served. The Hanshi (Cold Food) Festival was usually one day before the Qingming Festival. As our ancestors often extended the day to the Qingming, they were later combined. On each Qingming Festival, all cemeteries are crowded with people who came to sweep tombs and offer sacrifices. Traffic on the way to the cemeteries becomes extremely jammed. In contrast to the sadness of the tomb sweepers, people also enjoy hope of Spring on this day. The Qingming Festival is a time when the sun shines brightly, the trees and grass become green and nature is again lively. Since ancient times, people have followed the custom of Spring outings. At this time,therefore, tourists are everywhere. That's a brief introduction to Qingming.Thank you very much.