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Saving money is a good habit while others hold that using tomorrow's money is better.The findings are from a survey from Beijing information company.For my share,saving money is playing a key role in our daily life. Saving money in daily life can shape a thrift sense among people.It is konwn for us that it is difficult for our parents to make money and support the family.Without the thrift conscious,we may cannot ake good use of money and save money for better use.On the other hand,saving money is a merit from ancient China.Saving money is not mean we don't use money to buy things but through a good way to use money.If we can keep a good habit of saving money,we can be models for our children even can have impact on more people.What's more,saving money can make us have enough money for the use of urgency.If we always using tomorrow's money, we may cannot to deal with some unexpected difficulities ahead of us.Such as car accident,serious illness. In a word,saving money is one of the crusial part in our life.It is acknowledged that everyone can get benefits from it than using tomorrow's money.
