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作者句法不错，但是文章整体句子稍微偏短；作者词汇使用较为丰富熟练，单词拼写方面要更仔细；过渡词和衔接词使用不恰当，缺少组织，可适当增加连接词的使用。
what is your opinion about the Internet? Some people think the Internet can improve the efficiency of studying and working.But others think that the youth are addicated to it , furthmore it can effect their study. I am for the first opinion. For i have tried to English through the Internet , and it helped me a lot. I used to writing and listening less , so my input and output abilities are very terrible.But now i listen to the VOA normal English every morning ,and i make a great progress, the Internet works.And i read others articals on website, learning the writing tricks from others . when i come across some good articals , i will recite it .And rewriting them in my own words in my next writing. Only you can control your awareness can you make best use of it.That is my opinion.
