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字数:300 满分:100分
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How to use money Many students do not earn money unless ask for their parents,so we nearly buy clothes and other things,and usually collect all kinds of coupons. In my opinions,we must study How to earn money,that we can buy what we want,this is the smart consumers,I can buy everything what need,and do not need ask for other people.