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字数:300 满分:100分
文中有几处句子错误;作者词汇量偏少,不过单词拼写方面做的不错;上下文衔接稍显不流畅;连词使用偏少。
How to use money Many students do not earn money unless ask for their parents,so we nearly buy clothes and other things,and usually collect all kinds of coupons. In my opinions,we must study How to earn money,that we can buy what we want,this is the smart consumers,I can buy everything what need,and do not need ask for other people. Let's us use our spare time to earn money,and use it high qualitily