2011年6月英语四级作文真题:网上购物

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Nowadays, Many people like to shopping on online in internet, splically young people. It is a fahsion statue in our daliy life. Actully, On online shopping have a lot of good, First, we can get all goods without out of home, it can help our to save times. Scend, we don't sastfiy with some goods, we can retrun to sales. but have a lot of bad side on online shopping. because we can't communication with sales and can't enjoy the shopping with friends. In my option, we haven't time when we shopping can go to online shopped. we can enjoy the shopping when we have many times. we should shopping in the mind .