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句法很棒，若适当增加一些从句的使用，文章会取得更好的成绩；可适当增加连接词和衔接词的使用；文章用词太过单一，且单词拼写错误较多；连词使用偏少。
Will Tourism Bring Harm to the Environment? In current society,tourism is more and more popular,more and more people like to go out have a tourism,so there is a question,many tourisms can bring harm to the environment? In my opinion,they can not! First,people can protect the environment form harm,they can throw rubbish in the cash,and many of them have rubbish in their bag,we can see "Don not throw everywhere". Only everyone have love,the world is more buautiful.
