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句法很棒，若适当增加一些从句的使用，文章会取得更好的成绩；文中用词稍显贫乏，有一些单词拼写错误；可适当增加连接词和衔接词的使用；连词使用偏少。
Will Tourism Bring Harm to the Environment? In current society,tourism is more and more popular,more and more people like to go out have a tourism,so there is a question,many tourisms can bring harm to the environment? In my opinion,they can not! First,people can protect the environment form harm,they can throw rubbish in cash,and many of them have rubbish in their bag,we can see "Don't throw everywhere". Only everyone has love,the world is more beautiful.
