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2013年考研英语作文预测话题:沟通的意义

发布时间:2013-08-23 17:28浏览次数:13015
要求:

题目要求:

围绕沟通的意义写一篇小文章。简明阐述自己的观点。

字数要求:

200字以内

用户的作文(系统评分84.5分
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拼写方面做得很棒,平时练习中注意词汇量的积累;行文较为流畅,作者文中过渡词使用的不错;文中应增加一些长难句的使用,会为文章添彩。

用户练习作文:

With the development of society, the pressure of modern person also increases. The pressure can be divided into two aspects: one is life pressure, the other one is work pressure. As we all know, the life pressure comes from many aspects of our life, include home expenditure, social communication, relationship between families and friends and so on. The work pressure was mainly caused by competition of work and the circumstance of work. In order to have an ideal life and to sustain family, we have to do better than our contestants in our work, and we must to deal with our relationship between colleagues and boss well. All these consist of the main part of our pressure. How to release our pressure has became a hot issue for us due to the above problems. In my opinion, firstly, we should have a good attitude to everything. We should face up to life with smiles no matter what happens. Secondly, we ought not to pay attention to what we gain and lose. It is said that gain consists in lose. Finally, life consists in content. We should learn to treasure what we have gained, but not to do all of us to chase what we want. If we do as the three points, pressure will vanishes soon or late.

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