2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

可适当增加从句和复杂句使用；过渡词和衔接词使用的比较不错；文章用了较为丰富的词汇，学术词汇略显单薄，同时注意单词拼写的检查。

As our socity is developping ,our life is changging everday.There is a sign of advantage in our life ----computer.nowerdays ,Can you imagine how many people lead a life that one can not use the computer ? But as the saying goes : Every coin has two sides. The computer brings us a lot of convinence ,but cause it is so powful that we might be lose control when we are in virtual world . Not only can the computer make our life easy,but also it is can do some other things we can not ever think about. for example, the computer makes the virtual world come true,and Use the computer ,you even can earn your life.Of course ,if you do not can control yourself good , the computer can send some disadvantages for you. such as ,health problems and so on. So what above said is just my views about the computer and our human being .The computer make our life improving,but,we really need control it better,just like a two sides sword.