2011年6月英语四级作文真题:网上购物

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My views on online shopping. In modern times,online shopping has become more and more popular and been a fashion,especially in college students or people who don't want to go out for shopping.Meanwhile, online shopping causes a serious discussion about whether it should be developed and promoted further or not. On the one hand,many people think online shopping brings us more convenience.They don't have to go shopping specially that takes more time.What's more,online shopping costs us less money but provides mors choices.Therefore,online shopping is more and more widespread and plays a more and more important role in our life. However,on the other hand,the others prefer to go to a supermarket than shop by the website.In their opinion,the safety of online shopping can't be sure and maybe the picture is much better than the real goods.Once they had spent much money but received the goods that didn't cover the value,they will lose heart absolutely,even get a depressed mood,so they won't try it easily. As far as I am concerned,online shopping has become an irreversible tendency with the development of science,and it will spread widely gradually,even in a country with time goes by.However,online shopping is impossible to take the main place of market shopping.Meanwhild,market shopping will still possess a large share of the business.So,I won't boycott it or rely it on completely.