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2009年12月英语六级作文真题:送孩子参加艺术班

发布时间:2013-05-18 10:33浏览次数:2052
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题目 Should parents send their kids to art classes?

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1.对这种做法有人表示支持
2.有人并不赞成
3.我认为…
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Nowadays there is a topic among us ,should parents send their kids to art classes? Some people agree with it ,in their idea ,they think ,send kinds to art classes can develop their interests ,besides ,study art at an small age can help kids learn and they are easier to susses than the one who start late .however some people think it is a wrong decision to sending the kids to art classes ,at their point they think send children to an art classes will kill kids' play time ,their childhood full of study it won't do a good affect to child As far as i can consider ,i think ,whether send a kid to art classes is all depend on the child ,if he is interested in art and willing to learn it ,our parent should send he to the art class .but ,if he show no interest in it ,parents can not force their child to attend the class ,they should give their kid a happy childhood .

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