Source: Bureau of Labor Statistics, Current Population Survey.
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It's widely acknowledged that studying can be tiring and costly especially when you are aimed to gain high degrees such as professional degree or doctoral degree,but education surely pays in one's life, bringing financial benefits for example.In most cases,employees with higher education degree earn more than those with less educational experience,and they are less likely to suffer from unemployment as is shown in the data above. However higher education degree can not guarantee success.As is shown in the data above,employees with professional degree prevail those with doctoral degree which emphasizes the significance of experience and application.After all,it is what you learn but not certifcate itself matters in one's overall ability.And for some people,too much time spending on learning mechanically undermining their opportunities for practicing.Furthermore,being success is the result of combining both EQ and IQ,between which EQ is even more essential.Also,the closer you are to success,the more good qualities such as endurance,diligence and so on are important. So,in my opinion,every student should pay attention to study, for education plays an important role in one's long-term development,and is supposed to cultivate other important qualities as well.Only then can one be able to reach a higher level of life and be a great man.