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托福Toefl作文模拟题附范文 第52篇:草率的判断是否可信

发布时间:2013-08-19 17:06浏览次数:17578
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作文题目:

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? 

Snap judgments can never be trusted.

Use reasons and examples to support your opinion.

草率的判断不可信。你同意这种说法吗?给出原因和例子。

字数要求:300字以内。

用户的作文(系统评分74.0分
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行文稍欠流畅,应适当增加连接词的使用;若增加一些从句的使用,文章会取得更好的成绩;作者能较熟练地使用一定的学术词汇,但拼写方面要再接再厉;请提高文章内敛性,段落和句子要围绕主题展开。

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Should the snap judgment can never be trusted Not everyone is Rubinson Cruseo that can do correct judgment in crisis timing.Rubinson is a man who is hero of imagination. we would probably make snap judgment during the crisis time. The large numbers of factors can effect our judgement such as time,emerge situation and a new of creation. however, if we have to trust the snap judgment, adquate knowledge and resonable excuse should to be emphasized. Firstly, Our modern society is developed with excessively speed, we must do correct judgment in a short time then make everything enter into normally progress. In illustrate, For a driver, any of snap judgment could appear heavily traffic jam; For a president, a snap judgment would bring more finacial burden to larbors and workers. For a doctor, a snap judgment could cause the death of patients. thus, the correct judgment is abuselotely benefit. Secondly, there is no denying that correct judgment can make more trust and usually has a good consequence. nowadays,a correct judgment like a milestone that might decide your position and overall quality. as a matter of fact, a correct judgment attain more chance and respect. Moreover, It is unreality that make correct judgemnt each time and snap judgment should be trust in special space. To be specific, doctors should do a snap judgment when a accident appear in operating, which might save a life at that moment, so does the drivers and others. because, in my opinions, snap judgment could make miracles. In conclusion, there should no prejudice against on snap judgment, both judgment is important, snap judgment ought to be trust ,but "no pain, no gain " must bear in mind.

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