文章词汇表达要更加熟练,希望能更多使用一些学术词汇;作者句法知识很棒,适当增加从句的使用,会取得更不错的成绩;层次不清晰,几乎没有使用衔接词;请注意分段。
On the importance of a name Everyone has a name,even a person can have two or more names.Just as a coin has two sides,different people hold different ideas.On the one hand,someone think a name is of great importance.In their opinion,a good name can make people remember them easily.Of course,a good name can leave people a better impression.On the other hand,we are ourselves,a name just a symbol.No one can displace us. However,as far as I am concerned,a name is very important to me.A name can make people know me better,they can learn lots of things from my name about me.From the name they may know the person who am I.What's more,as a Chinese,we should respect our tradition,we should follow our traditions and make more people protect it.