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2012年6月英语六级作文真题:人际沟通

发布时间:2013-05-18 10:50浏览次数:4565
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题目 The Impact of the Internet on Interpersonal Communication
要求
1.For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition.
2.the topic is "The Impact of the Internet on Interpersonal Communication"
3.You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words.
字数:150满分:100分
用户的作文(系统评分79.0分
评语:

拼写很棒,可适当增加学术词汇的使用;有效地采用了一些简单的从句为文章增色;恰当的使用了过渡词和衔接词,衔接手法做的很棒。

用户练习作文:

It is believed that since the computer was created, it have been used almost everything. With the development of computer , it gradually used not only in mathematics, physics, chemistry and astronomy, but in place like hospital, library and military army to replace the work of man .But it used most popular in communication during common people. In the past, when we want to communicate to someone, we must meet each other ,with the time development ,we can write a letter ,call a phone to someone ,tills the computer was created ,we began sending a emails to our friends replaced writing to them. Now, there are so many communication software we using, we are no longer must to runs to somewhere for meeting someone ,we can use our computer voice or video. However, this phenomenon has influenced our Interpersonal communication .We communicate with each other in this way we can't see their expressions on face, so we can't know whether the man we are communication is real happy ,sad or others by expressions, only by the means of letter. It is really not in favour of the Internet on Interpersonal communication.

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