2004年1月英语六级作文真题:浪费现象

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with the development of the china economy people lived wealthy life then there are many peoples' sons and daughters went to university however many students didn't cherish their nice life contrary nowadays wasting phenomenon is very common for example many students spent their allowance from their parents to traveling and buying notable clothing and so on everyone know wasting is very hard for us, especially for university students because as a university students we should establish a good sample we should cherish our current condition and using our resources we occupied to the appropriated field. therefore as a contemptory student , we should stop wasting phenomenon and we should act instantly.