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2010年专四作文真题:学生雇佣清洁工

发布时间:2013-05-18 11:48浏览次数:5303
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题目 Should College Student Hire Cleaners?
说明 It was recently reported in a newspaper that six students who shared a dorm at a local university hired a cleaner to do laundry and cleaning once a week. And each of them paid her 60 Yuan a month. This has lead to a heated debate as to whether college students should hire cleaners. Should College Student Hire Cleaners?
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1.in the first part of your writing you should present your thesis statement
2.in the second part you should support the thesis statement with appropriate details
3.in the last part you should bring what you have written to a natural conclusion or a summary.
字数:200满分:100分
用户的作文(系统评分87.5分
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文章词汇表达丰富,学术词汇积累做的也很棒;作者有一定功底,可在平时练习中增加长难句的记忆;全文结构较为严谨。

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Since the Department of Education lifted the ban on students getting married while still in college in 2005, the number of young couples that choose to get married before graduation is on the increase with each passing day. This phenomenon has became a hot topic and has arouse wild public concern. Many people hold the opinion that early marriage is likely to hamper the development of college students, while others hold the opposite views. As for me, I tend to remain neutral on this issue. My arguments for this point are listed as follows. The main reason for my propensity is that the effects of early marriage on students vary from person to person. On the one hand, for instance, for a man who has a wise head on young shoulders, and is economically independent as well, we can’t say for sure that he is not able and mentally prepared to get married and undertake the corresponding responsibilities. On the other hand, for an impetuous young man, the corresponding responsibilities and problems come with early marriage may turn his life into a disaster. Furthermore, a stable and enjoyable relationship can motivate people to work harder for their family. In a word, everything is a double-edged sword, early marriage is no exception. We should approach a problem objectively. Whether to marry early or not is depend on one’s personal conditions.

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