2011年12月英语四级作文真题:坚强的意志

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Learning from the history and the great men of the whole world, we can see that no one can succeed without a strong will. A famous writer of US said, on the calm sea everyone is a pilot. The strong will is kind of a good charactor of human beings ,which never comes out when all is good for us. But at the monent we get in troubles, it disappears and helps us to succeed. In addition to, we, as students, have to study with strong will. All of us know that nothing is easy to do and each subject is hard to learn nowadays, should we give up easily? Of course not, we pick up the weapon made of the strong will to fight , and beat. All that seems to me to link us with the good future.