2011年12月英语四级作文真题:坚强的意志

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Through the history and the greaters of the whole world, we can see that no one can succeed without a strong will. A famous writer says, on the calm sea every man is a pilot. The strong will is kind of a good character of human beings ,which never comes out when all is good to us. But at the moment we get in troubles, it appears and helps us to succeed. In addition to, we, as students, have to study with strong will. All of us know that nothing is easy to do and each subject is hard to learn nowadays, should we give up easily? Of course not, we pick up the weapon made of the strong will to fight, and win. All that seems to me to link us with the good future.