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Nowadays,online shopping is become a fashion .more and more people choose this way to buy their's want .online shopping do influence our life , because we stay home go shopping instead of go out . There are some advantages with online shopping . first, for most of people ,it is convenient to chose ,you just should clink what you desired on computer .second, we don't waste time look for our need shop by shop . we can spend about an hour to buy. last, cheaper ,such as clothes , maybe some brand clothes have two price .usually , online shopping is cheaper than shop in life .but with problems grow ,for online shopping ,we should careful . trust is the biggest problem in buyer and seller.and because we can not touch product by oneself ,the quality is a matter. I think buy some small product can via online shopping , like spend more money ,it isn't necessary to buy in Interest. and if everyone has justice and benefit ,the trade will be good.
