2010年12月英语四级作文真题:让孩子独立

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How Should Parents Help Children to Be Independent? In daily life,so many parents help children to do everything,include study,life,eat,clother,etc. and they cann't adopt to the society.lose themselves. In order to let children to be independent,we must let they to do everything by themselves,include everyside.help them study independent.and give them advice. Above all,let children to be independent!