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Does saving money is good to make us become the smart consumers? We all know that we are consumers because all the pocket money we spend is from our parents,so most students are careful to their money,such as buying clothes in sales,looking for group-buy deals and so on .However,some people hold the opinion that this is not good for us to becoming the smart consumers, While for my opinion,It is a benefit to us a lot than its disadvantages. There are two reasons for it.For one thing,through saving money ,we know earning money is difficult and how to deal with our money,such as what do we need and what we do not need to buy .For this point,we are smarter than people who want to buy everything .It is a good habit to think twice before they spend money.For another,a good consumer can buy the same products with half the money that others spend,Only those people who could grasp the opportunities can become the smarter ones.Such as the mothers,they always do the same thing for the whole family.There is no doubt that they are smart consumers. For those reasons above ,we can easily draw the conclusion that saving money when we buy goods are really what the smart consumers will do , so a good consumer will think twice before they buy and will grasp the on sale opportunities in life .
