2012年12月英语六级作文真题(I):保持信任

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In the society,we must get along with other. In order to get along well with other people, we have to make friends with them. Whatever, if we can trust other, it will make a difference for us to maintain the friendships. Therefore,it's important for us to know how to maintain trust.Initially,we should try to trust other,and build a much more closed relationship between each other. Furthermore, we should prefer to paying for other. Sometimes, it's beneficial to closing the relationship. Also ,trying to learn about others habits and hobby, which also make a great difference. For example, parents are the most closest person in our daily life.They always win our trust in our daily life. Therefore,a intimate relationship always is important for people to maintain trust.