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2012年12月英语四级作文真题:Education pays

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Education pays...
Education pays in higher earnings and lower unemployment rates
Note: Data are for persons age 25 and over. Earnings are for full-time wage and salary workers.

Source: Bureau of Labor Statistics, Current Population Survey.

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It's widely acknowledged that studying is supposed to be tiring and costly especially when you are aimed at gaining high degrees such as professional degree or even doctoral degree.However, education surely pays in one's future development and can improve one's competitiveness in finding an ideal job.What's more,education brings financial benefits to employees also serves as a good example to prove that. In most cases,employees with higher education diploma earn more than those with less educational experience,and they are less likely to suffer from unemployment as is shown in the data above,and such a disparity is particularly apparent between college graduates and students who can't go to college. However higher education degree can not guarantee success.As is shown in the data above,employees with professional degree prevail those with doctoral degree which emphasizes the significance of experience and application.After all,it's your capability but not degree itself that really matters in working fields.Furthermore,being success is a result of combining both EQ and IQ,between which EQ is even more essential.Also,the closer you are to success,the more good qualities such as endurance,diligence and so on are important. In my opinion,every student should pay attention to study, for education plays an important role in one's long-term development,and is supposed to cultivate other important qualities as well.Only then can one be able to reach a higher level of life and be a great man.

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