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2004年6月英语四级作文真题:旅游向导

发布时间:2013-05-16 19:02浏览次数:1185
要求:
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition entitled A Brief Introduction to a Tourist Attraction. You should write at least 120 words according to the following guidelines: 
Your role: a tour guide
Your audience: a group of foreign tourists
Your introduction should include: 
● some welcoming words   
● the schedule for the day    
● a description of the place the tourists will be visiting (e.g. a scenic spot or a historical site, etc.)   
You should make the introduction interesting and the arrangements for the day clear to everybody.  
用户的作文(系统评分44.0分
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作者句法不错,但是文章整体句子稍微偏短;作者学术词汇方面要多累积,词汇表达不够丰富;文章层次不够分明,缺少组织,需注意文章整体的组织结构;请注意分段。

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firstly,we had a visit to chaohu lake,it gave deep imperssion to me.i want to use endless to describe the lake at first glance.you can find that the sky was connected with the lake visually.the spray flapped the shore ,the wave rolled with slap.the distant mountain partly hidden and partly visible when i have an overlook.

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