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The Accident It is terrified for me to see an accident at 11:20 today. As a witness, I must say something about what I was watched. There was a red car who came from left, which is a wonderful car of "baoma". What's more,I like the car very much, while I dont like the driver. Because the driver ignored the red light above his head and went through the sidewalk quickly. Insides, I don't know the red whether speed up or not, while a motorbike came from right.Then, I would be like to say sorry for the bad thing happened. Finally, The time, I remembered I just looked at my watch, is 11:20 in the morning. People surrounded with them, and the driver and the girl who between in the motorbike was died. These just I know for this accident, and I hope it will help you something.
